a. Iris, Kesternich, & Joachimk, K. Winter. (January 22, 2012). Effects of Wars. Retrieved from www.rand.org/content/dam/rand/pubs/working_papers/2012/RAND_WR917.pdf This article published by the NIA funded RAND Center for the Study of Aging (P30A012815) and the NCHD funded RAND Population Research Center (R24HD050906).The authors of this article are in University of Munich. The information that I took is free, and the website is up to date( January 22, 2012). I will use the examples in this article as a support in my research paper.
Broadberry, S. N. and Howlett, P. (1998), 'The United kingdom: "victory at all Costs" in M. Harrison(ed), The Economy of World War 2: six Geat powers in International Comarrison, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press,pp.43-80.( This is from book in the Internet)
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The earth plant has a lot of dangerous problems that could threaten gender's lives. Wars are one of the biggest issues which societies in this time are concern about. Even though the people have known the impacts of wars on generations are very harmful, they are still thinking about making more wars. The effects of wars are unusual death of innocent people, destroying the environment, and declining the economy.
First of all, the wars have harmful effects on human beings. Because of the fact that the people during the war had used unclear bomb and a thousand of rockets against their enemy via tanks and airplanes, they murdered a lot of soul of human beings. For instance, in a war among the USA and Japan, the USA used one of the lethal weapons in the earth it is call "Unclear Bomb" ( K-Yokro, N Kamada 2000). The statistic showed that the nuclear bomb has been estimated that over the years 2.5 million innocent people have died and more million were wounded and displaced as a result of this bomb being dropped (K-Yokro, N Kamada 2000). In addition, there is another impact of using this bomb on human beings. The apparent effect on the societies in Japan is obstruction and congenital deformity since they were born (BBC News). This kind of healthy problem could persist to the next generations in Japan. Furthermore, the Second World War Two was one of the major transformative events of the 20th century, with 39 million deaths in Europe only (Iris Kesternich, Bettina Siflinger, James P. Smith, and Joachim K. winter (Jaunuary 2012)). Because Hitler wanted to dominant all over the Europe countries, he was using violence in that battle. As a consequence of this war, the total number of Hitler's killed was 55 millions of innocent people and wondered 35 millions(Iris Kesternich, Bettina Siflinger, James P. Smith, and Joachim K. winter (Jaunuary 2012)). On the whole, the war is a destroyer and people are the sufferers.
Destroying the environment is majority of effects of the wars. During the war both of the countries which they are fighting each other use rockets and bombs. Because the people rely on using chemical materials to creative rockets and bombs, they can lead to serious affects on environment. For example, the air is filled with toxic pollution emanating from dust particles and radioactive fragments, pollution not only the air but surface water as well (By Ciels cantoria –edited by Donna Cosmato). Moreover, war can also affect the agricultural. For instance, agricultural production is impaired as soil and water became contaminated with radioactive materials. In addition, due to the fact that the toxic chemicals spread out through the air impairing, the growth and existence of plants wildlife ( K- Yokro, N Kamada 2000).
Wars can also have negative effects on the economic for both of the countries which are fighting. For example, the USA is looking for using the modern technology such as submarines, warplanes, and tanks in the war. This is decline the economy of the country, and can also lead to other problems because the cost of this equipment is very expensive. On the other hand, the country that attacks from other country will be having trouble in economy too. Each country has a strategy in the war, and looking for the fundamental location where they can bomb such as airports, resource of power electricity, and important factories. Therefore, the economy of the country which attacked will be downturn, and will be developing ( Elsevier- E miguel, G Roland- Journal of Development Economics, (2011). Furthermore, when is the economic depression, the rate of people who is hunger will increase ( Case, Anne David Lubotsky and Christina Paxson. 2002. " Economic status and health in childhood). For instance, World War 2 caused several severe hunger cities that led to many casualties, and many have had long- term effects on health of survivors (Currie, Janet. 2009). Since the beginning of the German occupation in Poland, the nutritional situation of the non- German population was poor.
In short, the disadvantage of war is more than advantages if it in real has advantage. The major effects of wars are homicide and injure people, it is ruin the environment, and it makes the economic downturn. Every country in the world has to think deeply before starting war because the impact of wars is very dangerous. In my opinion, war what is good for, absolutely nothing.
In this essay, author stands the main effects of the war are civilian be killed, environment distraction, and financial loss. For the first point, author use nuclear bomb and Nazi’s mass slaughter as examples to explain the normal civilian be killed with no reason. For the second point, author use the bomb fight and the chemical spread to proof that the air and the land are polluted because of the war. For the last point, author indicates the decrease of US economy is related to the American’s military training which will cause financial loss.
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1- fundamental2- lactation
3-depression
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6-obstruction
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9- nuclear bomb
10-congenital
11- deformity
12-dominate
13-persist
14-innocent
a. Iris, Kesternich, & Joachimk, K. Winter. (January 22, 2012). Effects of Wars. Retrieved from
www.rand.org/content/dam/rand/pubs/working_papers/2012/RAND_WR917.pdf
This article published by the NIA funded RAND Center for the Study of Aging (P30A012815) and the NCHD funded RAND Population Research Center (R24HD050906).The authors of this article are in University of Munich. The information that I took is free, and the website is up to date( January 22, 2012). I will use the examples in this article as a support in my research paper.
K- Yokoro, N Kamada- War and public health, 2000.
War and Public Health - Barry S. Levy, Victor W. Sidel - Google
Dr- F Baranby- 2004.
How to Build a Nuclear Bomb: And Other Weapons of Mass Destruction - Dr. Frank Barnaby - Google
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Childhood, and Human Capital Development,” Journal of Economic Literature. 47 (1). pp.
87–122.
www.rand.org/content/dam/rand/pubs/working_papers/2012/RAND_WR917.pdf
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- The earth plant has a lot of dangerous problems that could threaten gender's lives. Wars are one of the biggest issues which societies in this time are concern about. Even though the people have known the impacts of wars on generations are very harmful, they are still thinking about making more wars. The effects of wars are unusual death of innocent people, destroying the environment, and declining the economy.
- The essay has introduction is clear and is general to specific type. However, it may need more parts in the general to specific
.First of all, the wars have harmful effects on human beings. Because of the fact that the people during the war had used unclear bomb and a thousand of rockets against their enemy via tanks and airplanes, they murdered a lot of soul of human beings. For instance, in a war among the USA and Japan, the USA used one of the lethal weapons in the earth it is call "Unclear Bomb" ( K-Yokro, N Kamada 2000). The statistic showed that the nuclear bomb has been estimated that over the years 2.5 million innocent people have died and more million were wounded and displaced as a result of this bomb being dropped (K-Yokro, N Kamada 2000). In addition, there is another impact of using this bomb on human beings. The apparent effect on the societies in Japan is obstruction and congenital deformity since they were born (BBC News). This kind of healthy problem could persist to the next generations in Japan. Furthermore, the Second World War Two was one of the major transformative events of the 20th century, with 39 million deaths in Europe only (Iris Kesternich, Bettina Siflinger, James P. Smith, and Joachim K. winter (Jaunuary 2012)). Because Hitler wanted to dominant all over the Europe countries, he was using violence in that battle. As a consequence of this war, the total number of Hitler's killed was 55 millions of innocent people and wondered 35 millions(Iris Kesternich, Bettina Siflinger, James P. Smith, and Joachim K. winter (Jaunuary 2012)). On the whole, the war is a destroyer and people are the sufferers.
Destroying the environment is majority of effects of the wars. During the war both of the countries which they are fighting each other use rockets and bombs. Because the people rely on using chemical materials to creative rockets and bombs, they can lead to serious affects on environment. For example, the air is filled with toxic pollution emanating from dust particles and radioactive fragments, pollution not only the air but surface water as well (By Ciels cantoria –edited by Donna Cosmato). Moreover, war can also affect the agricultural. For instance, agricultural production is impaired as soil and water became contaminated with radioactive materials. In addition, due to the fact that the toxic chemicals spread out through the air impairing, the growth and existence of plants wildlife ( K- Yokro, N Kamada 2000).
Wars can also have negative effects on the economic for both of the countries which are fighting. For example, the USA is looking for using the modern technology such as submarines, warplanes, and tanks in the war. This is decline the economy of the country, and can also lead to other problems because the cost of this equipment is very expensive. On the other hand, the country that attacks from other country will be having trouble in economy too. Each country has a strategy in the war, and looking for the fundamental location where they can bomb such as airports, resource of power electricity, and important factories. Therefore, the economy of the country which attacked will be downturn, and will be developing ( Elsevier- E miguel, G Roland- Journal of Development Economics, (2011). Furthermore, when is the economic depression, the rate of people who is hunger will increase ( Case, Anne David Lubotsky and Christina Paxson. 2002. " Economic status and health in childhood). For instance, World War 2 caused several severe hunger cities that led to many casualties, and many have had long- term effects on health of survivors (Currie, Janet. 2009). Since the beginning of the German occupation in Poland, the nutritional situation of the non- German population was poor.
In short, the disadvantage of war is more than advantages if it in real has advantage. The major effects of wars are homicide and injure people, it is ruin the environment, and it makes the economic downturn. Every country in the world has to think deeply before starting war because the impact of wars is very dangerous. In my opinion, war what is good for, absolutely nothing.
Reverences:
1) BBC news.
2) Currie, Janet. 2009." Economic Literature". 47(1).PP.
3) Elsevier- E miguel, G Roland- Journal of Development Economics, 2011.
4) S Broadberry, M Harrison- (2005). The Economics of World War I - Google.
5) Iris Kesternich, Bettina Siflinger, James P. Smith, and Joachim K. winter (Jaunuary 2012) The Effects of World War Two on Economic and Helth Outcomes across Europe.
www.rand.org/content/dam/rand/pubs/working_papers/2012/RAND_WR917.pdf .
6) Anne Case David Lubotsky and Christina Paxson (2002) Economic status and helth in childhood: the origins of the gradient. www.princeton.edu/rpds/papers/pdfs/case_paxson_economic_status_paper.pdf.
7) K- Yokro, N Kamada (2000). War and Public Health - Barry S. Levy, Victor W. Sidel - Google
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In this essay, author stands the main effects of the war are civilian be killed, environment distraction, and financial loss. For the first point, author use nuclear bomb and Nazi’s mass slaughter as examples to explain the normal civilian be killed with no reason. For the second point, author use the bomb fight and the chemical spread to proof that the air and the land are polluted because of the war. For the last point, author indicates the decrease of US economy is related to the American’s military training which will cause financial loss.
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